Getting Your Story to Flow
Getting any story to flow is a common problem that all
writers face from time to time and there are numerous reasons behind why it sometimes
proves difficult to get the narrative to work and make sure it stays that way.
When a story does flow, that’s when a writer is really focused
and ‘in the zone’. It means that the words just keep flowing and the writer has
to write until the scene or chapter is completed. Some people keep going until
tiredness sets in. Creativity is at a peak; thoughts and ideas come naturally
and seem so effortless.
But then there are other times when nothing much happens
and the flow of the story stutters and seems more of a chore than an enjoyable
experience.
When we think of ‘flow’, it’s the seamless quality of the
story that matters. When a story doesn’t
flow, then there are problems either with the narrative/story or the approach
used by the writer.
Stories should flow smoothly; the writing should come
easily, however sometimes this is far from the case. The process can sometimes be anything but
smooth, and it’s one of those things that doesn’t magically appear at the click
of the fingers – writers have to work very hard to establish it and maintain it.
Creating flow, however, is down to technique and a bit of
experience.
Things that Affect Story Flow
There’s
no getting around it, but bad writing really does affect the flow. Bad sentence
structures, poor grammar, lack of clarity, no description and poor dialogue can
disrupt the course of the story and put the reader off. There is little flow,
if at all.
Contrived and stilted writing doesn’t help, either.
This happens when writers try too hard. The thing to remember is that you’re
not out to impress readers with fancy words or overly complicated sentences,
but rather to entertain them with an amazing story told as effectively as
possible. Leave the fancy words and the complex sentences to those who are
masters of it.
Wrongly formatted dialogue can inhibit story flow. Learn how to set out
dialogue correctly, with correct punctuation, and make it pertinent and punchy
so that it engages the reader instead of confusing them because they’re unsure
who is doing the talking or the action.
Huge chunks of narrative or
boring description can bring the story flow to a full stop. Readers don’t have
much patience, so when faced with overly long paragraphs, they tend to switch
off. Info dumps don’t help the story in any way. That said, not all huge blocks of description will
necessarily impede story flow. Written properly,
larger sections of well written description, balanced with narrative and
dialogue, actually help the flow of
the story. The art is not to overdo them – every descriptive passage has its place.
Unless you are deliberately
writing a story out of sequence (for dramatic effect, for instance) make sure
that you write the story in the correct order of events that run parallel to
the plot. In other words, the story starts at a crucial moment and moves along
a timeline in chronological order,
with one event or incident leading up to another until the exciting conclusion
of the story. That way, the story won’t confuse the reader, but more
importantly, the entire flow of the story is linear, logical and smooth.
Other aspects that can mess
with the story flow are the choice of chapter or scene breaks. By their very
nature, they break the flow of the story, but they do so briefly and seamlessly, with good effect. It’s important that you
don’t pop a scene break in the middle of an important scene. That will kill the
flow instantly and ruin any emotion, tone, mood or atmosphere you’ve created,
and thus interrupt the reader’s focus.
Carefully place your scene
breaks and chapters. If done correctly, the reader will barely notice a
deliberate break in the flow that is also essential for it to continue.
Ways to ensure the story
flows:
- Make sure you have a plan to work to – you’ll know roughly where you’re going and what will happen. This helps to avoid writers block and the inevitable struggle to force the writing.
- Plot points – these are essential in order to keep narrative momentum. Make sure you plot your story.
- Make sure you know the important turning points in the story, i.e. the key incidents that cause twists and turns to keep the reader on the edge of their seat.
- Ensure dialogue is correctly formatted. Keep it pertinent and punchy.
- Don’t overcomplicate sentences or go with obscure or fancy words. Keep it simple and clear.
- Keep the narrative, description and dialogue balanced. Avoid info dumps and huge blocks of narrative.
- Always try to escalate the action. The more in escalates, the more tension, conflict and excitement you create, so the story flow should be effortless.
- Keep your story events in order – it’s easier for the reader to follow.
- Choose your scene breaks and chapter breaks carefully. Try to end each one on a mini cliff hanger to ensure the reader stays glued to the story.
If you really want to know if your story flows, then read
it aloud. You will soon learn if it stutters, pauses, drags, meanders and so
on. If it flows properly, you should be able to read it without hesitation or
pause. It simply works. Words flow.
Sentences flow. Paragraphs flow. In fact, the entire book flows.
Story flow is down to technique and having a feel for the
entire story. Take the time and don’t rush the process and the story flow will
come naturally.
Next week: Better writing – Begin to/started to/decided
to – why you should avoid these.
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